He did put a ^^ face next to it, I think it was done in a friendly fashion Lewis.

I can tell you from my perspective, that I didn't expect to be able to flip him quite so easily. The shape of the 2 robots coming together would need precision driving so even as the winner I was quite surprised, hence my offer to back Joey up on a rewrite if he felt he wanted on. Both of us agreed that in a real life fight the most likely outcome would be for DT to win on a judges decision so I think we were both surprised by DT's dominance.

That being said, it was a well-written fight, however perhaps try thinking more about how 2 shapes coming together might react. Sad I know, but I used to make cardboard replicas of the vapourbots to help me work outhow they might react in a fight. I'm not saying to go to those lengths, but it's just a pointer

Again though, in terms of how it was written, it was excellent and I hope you don't think me rude for making my observations.