lol, not bad, descriptive and to the point.
Two things though...try to make the fights a bit more exciting (without going overboard of course), you know, jazz them up a bit. Also, try and make them a bit longer. If I stretch out that paragraph, it's barely 3 and a half lines long (on the family computer anyway :P).
Just some friendly advice.
OK Kody
P.S. Did you like the Orrion/Oreo joke :P
Go me!
I agree with Kody, a little bit on the short side, but not bad at all.
We return for some more action.
Jinx vs Megaroll 2
The house robots are Shunt and Sgt Bash
3....2...1.. ACTIVATE
Megaroll 2 comes racing out of the traps to try and cause some damage to jinx and CRASH!!!!. The impact
sends a shower of sparks across the arena because Jinx hit the drum at the exact same time. Now it looks
like Megaroll 2 is having trouble getting back up to speed, but does eventually but Jinx rushes in and hits it
BASH!!!!!!!!. It looks like Megaroll 2 cant get back up to speed, in fact the weapon is dead. Jinx now pushes
it towards the flipper and watches as Megaroll 2 flies into the arena wall with a bash. Megaroll 2 now tires to
get Jinx over to the house robots, but is lacking that power to do so. Jinx now slams the axe into Megaroll 2's
body. The axe is now stuck in the body. Jinx pushes Megaroll 2 towards the house robots. Shunt brings his axe
down on the top on Megaroll 2, look at the holes in the top. Jinx lifts Megaroll 2 up into the air. Now it turns its
attention to the side wall and tries to dump Megaroll out of the arena. But due to the fact the axe is stuck. It
means that Megaroll 2 is hanging outside of the arena for dear life. Jinx now reverses which makes Megaroll 2
hit the wall and finally drop off. Jinx does a victory spin. But Shunt does'nt like it and brings his axe down on Jinx.
Jinx hits back and rips out the safety link in the process!!. Now Jinx slams the axe down on the floor and it gets
under where SGT Bash is and flips him over. Now Jinx does a victory spin without any interruptions, execpt for
one thing.
CEASE
Megaroll 2 is dead once again as Jinx proceeds to the heat final
Still short, but sweet. w00t!
Eternia vs. Jinx
That's a powerful flipper but I see an advantage here; the HDPE. It's thick but it's not as resistant as some other materials like aluminium alloy or titanium. I can dent it up and even poke a hole into it (though I'm doubtful I'll carve the hole all the way through due to 40mm of HDPE :P). With this, I see two possibilities.
1) Jinx gets the axe stuck in the HDPE, and drags Eternia into the pit.
2) Jinx doesn't get the axe stuck in the HDPE, but it still leaves a huge mark.
Thus, the plan will be to utilize my more powerful drive and get around to Eternia's sides, while making sure not to drive close to the arena wall (lest I get thrown OOTA) or pit, and hammering away on that top. The flipper seems to be made of that stuff too so maybe if I dent it up well enough it won't run flush with the ground anymore and then I can get under from anywhere. Generally, just axe him up until I can grapple him properly and get him down the pit.
G'luck Mr. Leo.
That is one of the better properties of hdpe.Originally Posted by kodster
When it comes to axes you want a material that absorbs the impact, not resist it. Your axe will just bounce. To combat axes I prefer hdpe over aluminium or titanium every day.
Which means you cant get away and I can turn into you to line up the shot.1) Jinx gets the axe stuck in the HDPE,
Which will not help you at all unless it goes to a judges decision which I don't intent to.2) Jinx doesn't get the axe stuck in the HDPE, but it still leaves a huge mark
A more powerful drive doesn't help either, all I need to do is turn and you need to arc around to get to the side of me, so my flipper will be in line with your robot at all times. Once you are up my flipper arm, no amount of drive will save you.
Bon Chance monseigneur Kody.
(edit: reworded first sentence)
Eh, I can still use the front forks to get under your flipper. Jinx has 2WD near the back, and her front forks are welded to the scoop; she'll lean her entire body weight on 'em so they'll get under your flipper no problem-o.
We'll see about that. The pit part not the pint part.Eh, I can still use the front forks to get under your flipper. Jinx has 2WD near the back, and her front forks are welded to the scoop; she'll lean her entire body weight on 'em so they'll get under your flipper no problem-o.
For the heat final
Eternia vs Jinx
3....2....1... ACTIVATE
Eternia comes racing out of the traps at Jinx, Jinx tries to hit Eternia, but misses a Eternia gets away.
Jinx now chases Eternia down. Eternia now reverses and gets under the side of Jinx and lets out an
almighty flip BASH!!!!! Jinx hits the floor hard. Jinx now self rights, but Eternia chases her down and
flips her from the side again. This time, Jinx landed right side up. Jinx now gets under Eterina and pushes
him into the floor flipper WHOOOOSH!!!!! Eternia smacks into the wall and back down. Eternia self rights.
Look at that. Eternia's c02 canister bursted when he self right. Eternia manages to get it's flipper down
as Jinx chases him down immeadiatly, pounding away with the axe. But Eternia is absorbing almost most
of the attacks. Scratches here and there but Eternia is holding up well. Now Eternia gets under Jinx and
pushes Jinx into the side wall at speed. Now the pit descends, Eternia, still under Jinx, manages to get a
couple of slams into the walls before Jinx finally gets away. Eternia gets under Jinx again and shoves her
onto the floor flipper and OMG!!!! Jinx hit the roof and took out a few lights. Jinx though is completley
unshaken and chases Eternia across the arena. Eternia is now cornered by Jinx. Who slams it's axe down
again and again and again. Jinx grapples withe Eternia and pushes him towards the pit. Eternia is fighting
back. Will he hold on. NO he wont as Jinx lets go CEASE. Jinx through to the semis
I actually went into that expecting to lose...ah well, so much for my expectations, eh? Good fight Lian.
*buys Leo a pint*
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