hey Mark, I have some questions about your RPG before I may enter

how does The Oddeststey enter into this? you refer to it several times but it seems to be of no relevance whatsoever, you say its set in a different universe, and that it has a different hub world, to me it seems to have nothing at all in common with The Oddeststey, so I think you can better leave it out if this altogether to avoid confusion

you say you dont want to control everything, yet you've already controlled characters that belong to Steve and Alex? why not create your own characters, they could easily fullfill the role of Doomforall and Vengeance without using someone else's character and thereby making their freedom within this RPG smaller, what if Steve and Alex decide to enter? their roles seem to be laid out for them already by you

the story isnt bad Mark, and original as it is, I think I'll enter later on