okay, befor isay anything this isnt just a moan that i lost :P well done liam

just a few things i picked up...

the fights are very short, and you seem to like using CAPITALS and exclimation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!! quite a bit, also the way the fight is set out looks quite strange, for example your fights atm look like this...

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etc etc but it might look better if it were set out like this...

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also as far as the fight goes, i very much doubt that o.i.ds disk would get stuck in the floor, remember that its going at well over 5000 rpm so it should ae just skid across.

you have put 3 fights up in 2 days, there is a reason that we take a couple of days to write our fights and thats because we have more time to work on them and make them better, so dont rush and take your time!

jack