Type properly (punctuation), it makes it look much more pro, and will give the reader a better idea of the mood and the way things are said, for example.

This: so what he hit me so i hit him back what do you expect
And this: So what?! He hit me, so I hit him back! What do you expect?

...(it sounds like I'm being mean, I'm not, just trying to help )

By the way, I'm loving this so far, keep them coming!