Quote Originally Posted by corsair_lightning
And in comes Mega Hurts, immediately charging into the pit release button, as Behemoth flips Cabrakan, and hits it with the axe, creating a small dent underneath. And in charges System Shock: The veteran of all 3 previous wars, as it spins up the drum, and charges straight into Behemoth's scoop. Sparks fly, as the Series 1 grand finalist's scoop is shredded by the Achilles-Drum of System Shock. Cabrakan now gets under Mega Hurts, and charges into the CPZ, pushing Mega Hurts into Cyclone... And look at that shrapnel fly!!! The electrically actuated keyboard is thrown across the arena, as the side crumples, and Mega Hurts still moves!!! Behemoth now comes over and flips over Mega Hurts, who can't self-right, or move for that matter, as the Guardian comes in and counts it out.
1..2..3..4..5..6..7..8..9..10!!!
And now Mega Hurts L.T is fair game for the house robots, and Gearcrow comes in and clamps down on the immobile Laptop, as Cyclone comes in... And hits it with tremendous force!!! Both Mega Hurts and Gearcrow are thrown back by Cyclone's hit, as they ricochet into the wall... And out of the arena goes both of them!!! Meanwhile, Cabrakan has gotten under the side of Behemoth, and is now pushing into the half-spun up Cyclone, throwing it away. However, Behemoth now picks up Cabrakan with its scoop, and pushes Cabrakan OOTA, as it itself is pushed OOTA by System Shock!!! However, since it pushed Cabrakan out first, Behemoth with still go through.
...I can see at least eight glaring major errors here...Mark, can you please point out to me what they are, to prove you are at least capable of seeing the flaws in your own work in order to improve it?

(please bear in mind that while you undoubtedly know what exactly is going on with everything in your fights, you need to communicate what's happening to the rest of the people reading otherwise they don't have a copulating clue)