Hi ELLIOT, time for me to shine some light,

To begin with, the battle is very clear and very realistic. You read it, you understand it. The fact that it reads so well is also because its short, but in fact it may be too short as I will point out later.

Biggest downside IMO is that the Judges Decission is longer than the battle itself. Were supposed to believe an actual full-length battle has occured. For one thing I think your JD has too much text. For such a short and clear battle I think its a bit pointless to give such long descriptions in the JDs, I mean the descriptions are almost as long and detailed as the entire battle .

Above all I like the realism, make your battles more detailed and I think youre JDs abit more compact and you should be fine