How could I Improve pt 2

**leorcc** · 19th August 2008, 16:52

What are you looking for exactly Ben?

**alex_holt** · 19th August 2008, 17:15

Im premusing you want some practise of writing?

Ben: Feel free to use any of my robots if you want, they can all be found with images at http://www.alexjholt.tkwww.alexjholt.tk

Just in advance, remember, the more detail the better.

**team_orr** · 19th August 2008, 17:56

ben, you can use cROokED if you want
jack

**neontetra23** · 19th August 2008, 19:56

OK, I will use Hector Alex
Can I have a complete set of stats for cROokED please Jack

**team_orr** · 19th August 2008, 23:35

yep.

Name:cROoKED
Shape:box wedge,dimensions are,1m long,0.75m wide and 0.5m high at the back.
Chassis:6mm mild steel
Armor:6mm hardox(f)6mm ti(b+s)
Weapon:a co2 full pressure flipper at 750psi with 1 110mm ram,and a 2kg bottle,the arm is hinged at the back and made of 8mm mild steel
Battery:2x 12v slas wired in series
Motors:2x magmoters at24v
weight:98kgs
Wheels:2x go-cart wheels
Ground clearance:0mm at the front,and 2mm at the sides and the back
Speed:10mph
Turning circle:0m

jack

(Message edited by team_orr on August 20, 200

**neontetra23** · 20th August 2008, 00:23

Here we go...

Our arena is the Robot Wars series 7 arena
Our house robots are Cassius Chrome and Shunt

3-2-1 Activate

cROokED charges at Hector, and starts pushing him towards the wall, Hector activates his claws and makes some nice big holes in cROokED, who now fires his flipper and Hector goes over the top of cROokED and is now dragging him towards the Drop Zone
Crash!!!
Ouch, that has got to hurt, that was a 50KG Fridge, but only small dents are visable on cROokED, who is now being pushed towards Shunt
Smash! Crash! Crunch!
multiple hits from Shunt there, wait.. is that smoke, IT IS SMOKE!!, cROokED is on fire!, and there appears to be a small red box on the floor, ITS A BATTERY!, Hector now backs off and comes in again, but cROokED has fired his flipper, BUT TOO EARLY!, Hector is closing the jaws
Bang!
The ram has exploded, cROokED is weaponless!, Hector now pushing the lifeless corpse of cROokED, towards the pit, it on the pit, and Hector pushes the pit button, its all over, bye bye cROokED
Cease!

cROokED needs staightening
Hector is the winner!

**kodster** · 20th August 2008, 01:16

Could use more detail, but otherwise good.

**team_orr** · 20th August 2008, 08:06

:sad:
back to the workshop for me.

20th August 2008, 19:28

I dont like the use of arena hazards such as the drop zone, also how did the battery magically appear outside the robot, and surely if the battery was out and the robot on fire, how could the flipper work?

(Not to mention the exploding ram)