SHW tournament

[neontetra23]

Here is Fight #2

Revolver VS Tax Cutter

Our House Robots are Mr Physco and Cassius Chrome

3-2-1-Activate!

And Tax Cutter charges over to Revolver who is trying to get his disk up to speed,
Crash!
Tax Cutter has stopped the blade with only a small gash on the front, and that deadly axe is in line with one of revolvers wheels
Crunch!
the axe has missed the wheel and has punctured the body work, Revolver has broken free and the disk is now up to speed and revolver now moves towards Tax Cutter
Crash!
Tax Cutter manouvers out of the way and revolver hits the arena wall, and the disk doesnt seem to be moving, so Tax Cutter comes in and
Smash!
The axe has damaged the wheel of Revolver, who is now limping across the arena, bute the disk is working again, Tax Cutter comes in from behind
Crunch!
The other rear wheel is damaged but the disk
is up to top speed
Smash!
Tax Cutter got to near to the disk and has paid the price, hes been flung a good few metres across the arena, doing a complete roll, but lands on his wheels, a huge gash down the side now
Revolver is not moving and Tax Cutter has suffered the same fate, but who stopped moving first, and the judjes have given it to



Tax Cutter!

Tax cutter goes through
Revolver A Little Help From His Freinds

Next fight: Drive VS Back With You

And the rules say you have to eliminate 1 half of the clusterbot to win!

[neontetra23]

Here is Fight #2

Revolver VS Tax Cutter

Our House Robots are Mr Physco and Cassius Chrome

3-2-1-Activate!

And Tax Cutter charges over to Revolver who is trying to get his disk up to speed,
Crash!
Tax Cutter has stopped the blade with only a small gash on the front, and that deadly axe is in line with one of revolvers wheels
Crunch!
the axe has missed the wheel and has punctured the body work, Revolver has broken free and the disk is now up to speed and revolver now moves towards Tax Cutter
Crash!
Tax Cutter manouvers out of the way and revolver hits the arena wall, and the disk doesnt seem to be moving, so Tax Cutter comes in and
Smash!
The axe has damaged the wheel of Revolver, who is now limping across the arena, but the disk is working again, Tax Cutter comes in from behind
Crunch!
The other rear wheel is damaged but the disk
is up to top speed
Smash!
Tax Cutter got to near to the disk and has paid the price, hes been flung a good few metres across the arena, doing a complete roll, but lands on his wheels, a huge gash down the side now
Revolver is not moving and Tax Cutter has suffered the same fate, but who stopped moving first, and the judjes have given it to



Tax Cutter!

Tax cutter goes through
Revolver needs A Little Help From His Freinds

Next fight: Drive VS Back With You

And the rules say you have to eliminate 1 half of the clusterbot to win!

(Message edited by neontetra23 on July 16, 200

[neontetra23]

well I suppose everyone makes mistakes
How was the first fight?

(Message edited by neontetra23 on July 16, 200

[joey_picus]

I second Liams sentiments, too short and slightly lacking in detail, but could be worse.

[kodster]

*agrees with the above statements*

[neontetra23]

Continuation...

Drive vs Back With You

Our house roboots will be Mathilda and Dead Metal

3-2-1 Activate

Drive speeds towards Back To Rock and..
Slam!
The front spikes of Drive are stuck in the scoop of Back To Rock, meanwhile, With You has pressed the pit button, and Back to rock has lifted Drive into the air, and his heading towards the pit, its all over, Drives speed has been his downfall, hes in the pit, what a short battle, 17 seconds

Drive needs to take his driving test again
Back With You go through

[majinb]

of course Im glad I won, but seeing youre a newcomer writer I shall give you some tips to improve further

your first 2 battles were good, alot better than your third one, is it because youre getting tired with this tournament? (a problem seen more often) if so, I strongly advise you NOT to start big tournaments soon (like 16 people, 8 robots). I know some battles can be short, but still, its not smart to take advantage of that too often, you wont learn much from writing battles like this.

Your first 2 battles were pretty nice though, try to write more like that and improve a bit.

[neontetra23]

Yes, due to lack of interest