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[team_britespark]

Re-write that using punctuation please: thats a spellcheckers banquet.

wat

First you say your friend made it, now you state Stay Alive is mine.

Which is it? :P

[destroyer25]

kody its both of ours he made the cad he also made 4 more cad and no its not from a site k he made it with Rhino3D like i said bro he is a pro like u ok umm 2 of the cads i borrowed from a site Gametechmod.com but the cad of Stay Alive is ours (me and my friend) i thouht that u couldnt use or borrow Cads from othe sites and stuff after all its my first now i know that u can sorry about that

New Stat
Name: Minitour
Shape Steel Reign (BB R3)
Color: Grey
Speed: 20mph top speed
Weight: 220lb (100kg)
Armour: 6mm TI
Chassis: Titanium
Drive:. 2 S28-400 Magmotors running at 24v
Power: 6 NiCad packs
Motivation: 4 inner wheels
Ground Clearance: 0
Turning Circle: Zilch
Dimensions in CM (Length x Height x Wide)
Weaponry: 2 vertical spinning disk spinning at 8,300RPM powered by a Briggs & Stratton engine at 12v
Self-Righter: invertible
Strengths: powerful weapon, good armour and speed
Weakness: Hates Flippers

Ruark,

I understand that you are new, but that does not mean you can take somebody elses work for your own. And quite frankly I dont believe that other CAD is yours either, as I have seen it before as well. Please refrain from attempting this in the future.

Instead, why dont you ask people on this forum to make a CAD of your vapourbots? That way, well get a proper idea of what your bots actually look like.

[destroyer25]

ok bro my mistake umm i just like those cads umm anyways is it ok if i keep them on ur site and also if its ok with u kody to make me a cad but i do have a friend that does CADs to and i have them but dont have a scanner oh i ask Martijn= to do a cad but he didnt do it ive ask him lastweek and still he didnt get it so i search for CADs and borrowed them etc but i wanna keep Stay alive and my Revenge of the Zombies CAD on ur site

kody wat happen to the CADs?

They are not yours, so I removed them.

If you want a CAD on your vapourbots on this forum, ask one of us. But unfortunately, Ruark, the big reason that we cannot make you CADs at the moment is that your stats are, how shall I put it, not very sufficient.

For instance, Tripulta Raptor (BattleBots) but better does not really give us what you want exactly. Tripulta Raptor, okay, I can do that, but we dont know whats better about it, so I dont know what to think.

You might want to give us an accurate shape of your robot. Picture it and then describe it as best as you can without giving a complete example unless you are sure you want it to look that way. Instead of Tripulta Raptor but better, tell us how the shape is better than Tripulta Raptor, and maybe we will be less confused.

On that note, I think its time I took another look at your stats.

Name: Psycho Killer 2
Shape Tripulta Raptor (BattleBots) but better Colour: CAD coming soon
Speed: 24MPH
Weight: 220lb (100kg)
Armour: 6mm TI
Chassis: Titanium
Drive: 2 x LEM130 at 36v.
Power: 6 NiCad Battle Packs at 36v
Motivation: 4 5.5inch wheels
Ground Clearance: 0mm on the front 1mm on both sides and 1mm on back
Turning Circle: Zilch
Dimensions in CM (Length x Height x Wide) 75cm x65cm 20cm
Weaponry: crushing/lifting claw powered by a modified chainsaw engine driving a hydraulic pump at 2000psi it also has 2 custom made TI wedge on front to help get its opponents to the weapon with ease.
Self-Righter: invertible but can self right with weapon
Strengths: Powerful lifter, good armour and speed
Weakness: Hates spinners
Picture: Coming soon

- Can you describe what colours are on the vapourbot? We dont know what to colour it if you dont give us anything to work with
- A 24mph top speed seems a bit too fast, perhaps you could lower it?
- A titanium chassis is alright, but you might want to consider switching to a steel or Hardox chassis
- 1mm ground clearance is much too low, and your bot wouldnt be able to move around the ground properly; an average would be 5mm or 10mm
- Just 0 will do, no need to put zilch
- Your dimensions are quite compact, you might want to expand the length and width more
- How is it invertible if it is shaped like Tripulta Raptor? You need to explain stuff like this

Please expand on stats, and I will be more than happy to make you a CAD.

[destroyer25]

ok kody time to fix my stats sorry bro for this