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  1. 12th October 2008, 16:41 #11
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    That is a very good first battle Elliot, I am certain they will get even better as time goes by and Ill be happy to enter a tournament of yours. I recomend you do what Joey did and start with a small 8 robot knockout tournament just to get used to writing and organising before you move onto to bigger things. It is what I did, and now I am writing the 128-robot Robot SMASH!! Series III: Lock3d and Load3d
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  2. 13th October 2008, 17:27 #12
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    Overall, your writing styles very good, Elliot, with satisfying depictions of the action. My only problems are that the fights too short, and the sentences The disc is up to full speed again. Supernova is just waiting in the CPZ now. seem a bit dull and out of place.
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  3. 13th October 2008, 19:40 #13
    davids
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    Is it possible to reserve a spot in your tournament Elliot?
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  4. 13th October 2008, 19:50 #14
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    Me too Very good writing style - its kind of thriller novel-esque style of writing - suspense building through descriptions and actions. Basically, I like it a lot
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